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Update #4

Naming characters with Google AdWords

Here's a new trick.

In this book, I'm trying to craft a central character with some of that same iconic strangeness that makes Sherlock Holmes so appealing. There's a lot that goes into that, but for now, focus on the name. Sherlock Holmes. It leaves an indelible mark on the brain.

So, I have a name in mind for this character, and I was looking for a meaningful way to test it out—without giving it away.

That's where AdWords comes in.

Here's what I did:
Created a campaign attached to a bundle of search terms: mystery, detective story, sherlock holmes, noir, and more like those.
Came up with a whole set of names, basically wide variations on a theme. One was my original pick, but I liked all of them. Then, I created an ad for each one, all with the same body text but each with a different name swapped in for the headline.
Allocated a small budget ($40, to be exact) and kicked off the campaign. And wow there are a lot of people searching for stuff on Google. Over the span of 24 hours, my ads made about 100,000 impressions.

So the question—and I do think it's a serious question, insofar as it's a simulation of a decision that will confront many potential buyers of this book—the question is, which name worked?

The results, pixelated for secrecy's sake:
Here's the way I read this: The four names at the top all did about the same. I wouldn't choose a name with an 0.23% click-through rate over a name with an 0.20% just because of that measly 0.03 margin.

But the 0.07% at the bottom? I think there's real signal there. As it happens, the name at 0.07% was one I really liked—but it didn't make the cut. Alas.

My original idea—the name I came into the exercise with—is the one at 0.21%. So basically, I see this as validation: The name works. People don't see it and go "ew" or "meh."

But okay, I'll be honest. This was mostly just an excuse to try a new tool. Any nerd will tell you that tools can provide their own intrinsic rewards. There's an aspect of exploration to it, too: you're pressing out into new tool-territory, learning about what you can and can't do.

This little AdWords test is a first step. Mechanical Turk might be next. I mean, imagine—this is the sci-fi extrapolation—imagine highlighting a block of text, choosing a menu item called Test the way you'd choose Spellcheck today, and when you do, a little timer appears next to it. Five minutes later, ding—the timer goes off and you have the results right there, floating over the text. Aggregated feedback from an anonymous swarm of readers: "I stumbled here," "this variation works better," "this line rings false."

That might sound naive—it's definitely oversimplified—but I think there might be something useful lurking in this particular tool-territory.
So, finally, here's the irony: I'm making a big deal out of keeping this name secret. Functionally, it is secret—none of you know what it is yet! And yet... 100,000 people out there have laid eyes on it. Thousands of Google searchers have seen her name. What kind of secret is that?

Ah, liquidity. Ah, scale.

Sometimes, the vast sea of clicks can be a comfort.


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      Creator Saheli on September 11, 2009

      I just wanted to say that I don't think 0.07% should be villainous, but should be a misunderstood last-minute heroine, like Sydney Carlton.

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      Creator tim inman on September 3, 2009

      This is a great idea, but it would be much more expensive to do it well. As an Adwords customer, I know you aren't getting a very big sample for forty bucks. Don't rule out your favorite name over maybe a dozen or two clicks difference.

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      Creator Robin Sloan on September 2, 2009

      @Stephanie: Good question. It was a placeholder page that said essentially "Hey, thanks -- you just helped me out with my writing, even though you didn't realize it." Then a link to a short story.

      @Jeff: Love that! Yes, Mechanical Turk is next.

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      Creator Jeff Barr on September 2, 2009

      I'd suggest Mechanical Turk (even if I didn't work at Amazon).

      A few years ago one of my colleagues was trying to come up with a creative yet descriptive name for an internal accounting system. I asked Turk to suggest some first names that would be appropriate for an accountant. I got 100 good answers in a very short time and we ended up choosing "Penny."

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      Creator Stephanie Rosenblatt on September 2, 2009

      My question is, when people clicked through the ad, what did they see on the page they landed on?

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      Creator Jimmy Stamp on September 2, 2009

      I'm once again blown away by your use of technology. This is an amazing project!

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      Creator Kevin Meyer on September 2, 2009

      We can only hope Carmen Sherlock Holmes-Diego use such innovative detective techniques in the book!

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      Creator Robin Sloan on September 2, 2009

      @Lionfire: Then again, maybe the whole thing is a ruse... ;-)

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      Creator Robin Sloan on September 2, 2009

      @Lionfire: Someone else pointed out the same thing. Shhh. (Lots of digital detectives out there, it turns out.) And yeah, I agree w/ you re: not over-interpreting the results. I think it's a good data point to have, though.

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      Creator Lionfire on September 2, 2009

      No one knows any of those names. No one except, of course, those detectives who recognised the that you left a clue or two, and that Google caches its own ads.

      Perhaps a little more secrecy is required, but the idea has some merit. I'd be a little hesitant to assume that click-through implies a like or dislike of the name. Perhaps it just means that the name is familiar, and therefore possibly too similar to another character?

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      Creator Lily Sloan on September 2, 2009

      I agree with Gavin. .07% = villainous

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      Creator Gavin Craig on September 2, 2009

      So are you going to make the 0.07% name a villain? I think you really need to use that name somehow, especially if it was your favorite.

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      Creator Robin Sloan on September 2, 2009

      @Burt Yes! That's what I'm talkin about. It's like design thinking for fiction. Maybe this whole thing is just a prototype.

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      Creator Burt Herman on September 2, 2009

      Awesome use of adwords, go user testing!!!

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      Creator Andy Baio on September 2, 2009

      Clever. Let me know if you need MTurk help.

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      Creator Jack Cheng on September 1, 2009

      I see what's going on here. This is the old bait and switch, right? Make us think it's a sci-fi book when It's really going to be a book about how write and market a book in the 21st century ;)

      But seriously, I'm loving the updates and that you're keeping the what's actually going to be in the book secret.

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      Creator Yancey Strickler on September 1, 2009

      great post, robin

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      Creator Dan Bouk on September 1, 2009

      This is geek-tastic. Love it!

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      Creator Tim Carmody on September 1, 2009

      It's the lesson of "The Purloined Letter"! The only way to truly hide something is to hide it in plain sight.

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