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Part 2 of the Adventure Path, continuing the approach of lush with novel-caliber NPCs, dynamic plot arcs, and richly detailed maps.
Part 2 of the Adventure Path, continuing the approach of lush with novel-caliber NPCs, dynamic plot arcs, and richly detailed maps.
Part 2 of the Adventure Path, continuing the approach of lush with novel-caliber NPCs, dynamic plot arcs, and richly detailed maps.
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    1. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on June 2

      Check out the latest Update posting: A thorough and long-overdue Production Update, as well as several Map Previews!

      https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/infiniumgamestudio/dark-obelisk-2-the-mondarian-elective-pathfinderrp/posts/1901589

    2. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on May 22

      @Kyle: Good question. I'm waiting for Berinncorte Basecamp to wrap up, that way I can send all of the DO1-era hardcopy material en masse.

      DO2 will ship separately on its own once it's finished.

      Thanks for your patience. I'd be going out of my mind with eager anticipation for the hardcopy! All I can tell you is that it won't be too much longer now, and that it'll be worth the wait (though of course I'm a *bit* biased...).

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      Kyle R
      Superbacker
      on May 22

      Any idea when the hard cover version of DO1 - hardened historian would be coming out or are you eating for DO1 and DO2 hard cover and sending them both out?

      Thanks for the great work.

    4. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on April 12

      Quick update because some folks check Comments more than Updates, please check the most recent Update for a run-down on where things stand from a production standpoint. Short version:

      PROGRESS, YAY! And no, I don't know for sure when DO2 will be finished, but it will be worth the wait and quite enormous. :)

      https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/infiniumgamestudio/dark-obelisk-2-the-mondarian-elective-pathfinderrp/posts/1857344

    5. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on March 6

      Based on feedback (and my own gaming group), I'm considering a new Kickstarter campaign to expand the planned Berinncorte Basecamp product to be a "Before & After" supplement.

      Instead of ~100 pages softcover, it would be 300-500 pages hardcover, and instead of just an overview of the area outside Berinncorte usable for events in between DO1 and DO2, it would contain quests, NPCs, events, etc. for use during DO1 if the PCs wish to wander outside the city.

      In a broader sense, it would be a useful campaign tool for fleshing out the area outside any fantasy city.

      Thoughts? Feelings? Feedback? :)

    6. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on January 17

      @Jon--Stupid question: Are you opening the Pathfinder or 5E version?

    7. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on January 17

      @Jon--That's pretty awful! I'm so sorry. Let me try and find a Windows 10 box that doesn't have that font installed and I'll give it a try. I'll also double-check to confirm that used fonts were embedded in the PDF output.

    8. Jon Gilliam on January 17

      When I try to open the Berinncorte Dramatis Personae and Bestiary pdf in Adobe Acrobat Reader (on Windows 10), I get an error : Cannot extract the embedded font IYRZSX+VlaanderenChiseledNF. Some characters may not display or print correctly. And parts of the pdf are unviewable. Any suggestions?

    9. Joe Medica
      Superbacker
      on December 17, 2016

      @J Evans Payne i should have thought of that...

    10. Roger Haxton
      Superbacker
      on December 13, 2016

      @J. Evans Payne - My group has been wanting to try 5E and they were the ones that convinced me to do this as 5E in the beginning, but as I started to think about it, I just wasn't comfortable running something this size in 5E as none of our group has ever played that system.

    11. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on December 13, 2016

      Roger: Understood and I quite agree with the logic. I've just sent you the AB and the DB&P via RPGnow; let me know if you don't / can't grab them. Thanks!

    12. Roger Haxton
      Superbacker
      on December 13, 2016

      @J. Evans Payne - I changed the game system fully to Pathfinder in the backerkit survey. With something of this size I don't want to try to run it with a game system I'm not familiar with. I know Pathfinder and it makes sense to keep this as something I know. So, just an FYI that I changed from 5E to Pathfinder.

    13. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on December 5, 2016

      Hm... if you mean it blew up while downloading from RPGnow, you should still be able to download it from My Library once you're logged in to RPGnow?

    14. Joe Medica
      Superbacker
      on December 4, 2016

      OK, I managed to blow up the code for the adventure... It was taking a while to download, so I went to do something else and came back - the page had timed out. Can you resend the link, as the one in the original email is kaput.
      Thanks!

    15. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on November 28, 2016

      To clarify, the Atlases are only included as explicit Add-Ons, or as part of the Cartographer bundles. So, for everyone, unless you added one of these in BackerKit, no Atlases are included.

      Roger--In your specific case, I believe I made an Excel error and interpreted your Complete My Hardened Completionist add-on as including the Pathfinder version. My mistake is your gain! Enjoy the Pathfinder version. :)

      You'll still absolutely get the 5E version once it's published. It's still in conversion now, but I'm shooting to have it completed before year-end.

      Hope that helps clarify!

    16. Roger Haxton
      Superbacker
      on November 28, 2016

      @ J. Evans Payne
      I got the DO1 Adventure book, Dramatis Personae, and Bestiary, no Atlas so far. Also these were in Pathfinder format when everything else I ordered was in 5E format? Will I also get those for 5E or are you not doing a conversion of the DO1 stuff to 5E?

    17. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on November 11, 2016

      Jeremy--Your concerns are well-founded, particularly given the failure to deliver of some other KS projects of similarly-lofty ambition.

      I did cut myself off from offering more stretch goals that involve additional products--Husks and Grim Tokens really grabbed me, and I wanted to do them, but beyond that, even if pledges reach stratospherically, I'm stopping with additional content. There is DO3 and DO4 to write, eventually, to actually complete the Adventure Path, after all!

      I think we're at the point where I have to see what my options are in terms of hiring help. Not because I'm wary of capability, but to accelerate things so I can deliver at a good pace.

      I welcome feedback and opinion in all forms to help make things better, and believe it, I will ask your perspective and that of any other high-level backer as things evolve and are developed. I got some exceptionally useful critique from folks during DO1, and I'm optimistic that with twice the backers from then and a lot more focus and investment, the end products will benefit all the more.

      Doing this is a pure joy to me; it never feels like work. The only areas that I feel challenged in as a one-man shop are as follows...

      1: Artwork. I've been using a great resource, but he only does B&W stuff... time to fire up Fiverr and make a real investment in hunting down folks. This is the one area I can't really brute-force my way around, since I'm many things, but artist is definitely not one of them! If anyone has recommendations, I'd be eager to hear references.

      2: 5E Conversion. pcGen's options just don't make this as easy or fun as it is in Pathfinder. But I'm getting better at it.

      3. InDesign. My aging 6-year-old desktop has struggled mightily with this software, and earlier in the week it tried to upgrade to the CC2017 version that was just released, and now it won't launch it. This will be solved when I buy a dedicated laptop for creating, but it's lost me weeks, if not a month or more, of productive time. Ugh.

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      Jeremy Siemon
      Superbacker
      on November 11, 2016

      @ J. Evans Payne
      You talk very openly about how hitting a $10,000 level has likely impacted your future KS plans. What will happen if you hit another 10k in backerkit (which isn't totally unreasonable)? Like others, I have some concern that a one-man publisher can deliver that much content, much less quality content, in any sort of reasonable time frame. However, I've invested rather fully in the project and will choose to have faith that you will deliver great things.
      Also, as a 30+ year veteran of D&D, pathfinder, and numerous other systems, I am happy to be a sounding board should you need it during the development/delivery phases.
      Congrats on a shockingly successful campaign.

    19. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on November 7, 2016

      Paul--Outstanding question.

      Some history, then: I've been playing D&D since AD&D / 2nd edition. 3/3.5 is my true love, ultimately, for its complexity and the things it made possible--the OGL and the massive, unprecedented type and quantity of sheer content it unleashed upon our hobby remains perhaps the single most impressive event in the history of roleplaying, though it's easy to argue otherwise or even to view it as a bad thing--after all, who needs yet another $40 "Complete X" hardback with a handful of prestige classes, feats, and magic items?

      I buy, and read, every hardcover published by Paizo and The Company That Shall Not Be Named But Shall Instead Be Obliquely Referenced, Lest They Sue Us. At this point, due both to the difference in the prolificness of the publishers and the lifespan of their rules systems, I'm much more acquainted with Pathfinder then with 5E... but 5E and the legacy that made it possible still have a special place in my heart.

      So, to get around to answering the question: You're absolutely correct that the two systems have different founding principles, if you will, and therefore you should expect some variance between the output.

      My design approach is to create in Pathfinder, and then convert to 5E. I daresay 5E stalwarts will say that it shows, and that's fine with me. Pathfinder is more complex in comparison, almost to a fault. I do try at every point to make sure the monsters and NPCs "feel" as similar as possible across the two systems.

      To accelerate the process, I use pcGen, a tool which makes it ridiculously rapid and straightforward to create characters and statblocks... but only for the game elements it supports. Thus the Pathfinder options and detail is much more lux and textured than my 5E output, though no less lovingly crafted.

      For my products, I would say the "true" or "best" gaming experience will be whatever you actually plan to play... but all other things being equal, my Pathfinder output will probably always be a bit better, more intricate, more nuanced, than my 5E conversion. Perhaps that will change in the course of fulfilling this KS; perhaps not.

      Finally, to put on my managerial hat for a moment: Every designer or author needs to know what makes their products "special". It's a beautiful, wonderful time for indie content; it seems that there are tens of millions of products out there, all available for a pittance compared to the full-blown-retail options from "real" publishers. That's great for consumers, but for authors, it means there's hordes of competition.

      For me, the "value proposition" of my RPG projects is an immersive mixture of thoroughness, detail, and real characters. Sure, there's monsters, but who cares--it's the NPCs that shine. NPCs with real motivations, real backstories, real conversations, real quests. Those are the gaming elements that I focus on. The whole concept of variable difficulty and quadded statblocks and all is a really nifty mechanic, and I'm super proud of it--but I only designed that so that anyone, at any level, could find the adventure content accessible and playable. Statblocks are immensely useful, and I love crunch--the "Dramatis Personae & Besitary" is basically 500 pages of pure, unadulterated crunch!--but at the end of the day, what gives an NPC or monster the tone, feel, and flavor is really something beyond the stats.

      A good GM helps his players tell a compelling story. A great GM rewrites that story at every interaction, to fit his audience and the decisions they make. An excellent GM should really be able to pick up a great adventure, written for ANY rules system, and be able to use it without too much difficulty.

      So although I'd love to try to do a huge sales pitch on how everyone should buy both the Pathfinder AND the 5E versions of the project, at the end of the day, if *I* do my job right, then you should find either one fun and accessible.

      That said: The most compelling case for someone buying books for both rules systems is someone whose gaming group is likely to PLAY 5E, but as a GM or as a collector, you want the most complete, full experience; the Pathfinder statblocks will have a bit more detail and flavor there. Or, at the very least, double up on the crunch--so I'd say the DO1 DP&B, and the Bestiary of the Realm, at a minimum.

      Hope this helps more than muddles the decision!

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      Paul S. on November 7, 2016

      @ J. Evans Payne

      Are you able to speak more on your process of conversion from the Pathfinder system to 5th Edition? More specifically, how you're maintaining your vision of the world and its inhabitants such that any given monster, npc, or item (etc.) feels consistent and balanced when comparing stats between the two systems? Or will the tone of the world be noticeably different as you interact mechanically with one system or the other?

      I originally planned on pledging for a 5th edition copy since that's what my friends and I are currently playing, but I personally cut my teeth on 3.5. Based on my experience with 3.5 and 5th, and what I've read of PF, PF is heavy on crunch and lends itself to uber-powerful PCs while 5th streamlines the crunch and the power levels are more down to earth (in the context of a fantasy RPG, anyway) To reiterate: how (and to what degree) are you maintaining your artistic vision between the different design philosophies of the two systems?

      TL;DR: I'm wondering if I should throw a few more bucks into the BackerKit for some Pathfinder stuff to avoid losing anything in translation ;)

    21. Stormraider
      Superbacker
      on November 4, 2016

      @J. Evans Payne

      Heya, sorry for taking so bloody to reply to you, but my beloved phone died an untimely and enraging death last Friday. Then I got the flu or a cold from hell, or possibly The Plague - I'm not sure which, but I was down and for a week, (so it took forever to activate a new Note 5 that's been languishing in my underwear draw since last September because I was too lazy to upgrade from my Note 2. I am horrible, I know *hangs head in shame*)

      ANYWAY, as to your response, yes, that clears everything up for me. And I understand completely the reasoning behind your decisions. *nodnod* I'll do my best to pick up as many of the unlocked Stretch Goals thru the Backerkit, or whichever pledge manager you use. (I'm hoping my next stipend arrives around the same time - Xmas presents early for me, mwhahaha! ...erm, ahem. No greed there; pretend you didn't read that.)

      In closing, yay! $10,000+ is an awesome amount! Congrats on that! Very nice achievement to be proud of. ♡☆♡

      --Storm

    22. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 28, 2016

      All--I went off on a pretty long rant, there, mainly because I can't imagine that Paul is the only backer viewing all of this with a well-intentioned but well-reasoned and logical concern about what it's physically possible for a mostly-one-man-shop to churn out! If that turns you off, well, then, you should probably nix your pledge... "verbose" is a pretty good way to describe my creative side! :)

    23. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 28, 2016

      Paul--"Ambitious" is indeed probably the best word for all of this. It's reasonable to be concerned, to be sure. I appreciate your pledge and look forward to fulfilling it... but it certainly will take some time! I never meant to promise 4,000+ pages of content. All I wanted was $1k up front to pay for expenses for the next piece of this Adventure Path... but every single Stretch Goal was something on my radar to do, eventually, anyway.

      In terms of delivery... I can only say that Dark Obelisk 1 was conceived as a 128-page adventure... and was delivered as a 1,000 page monstrosity in six months. (Yes, it's true that I'm still working toward delivering the hardcopies and the 5E conversion.)

      During that project, I learned a great deal about how to approach this sort of thing, and how to maximize my time. So although it's taken me longer than expected to churn out DO1, I have the potential to be even more productive going forward.

      My goal from these Kickstarters is merely to break even, nothing more--and you can probably figure that out from the enormity of what's being promised at all pledge levels right now. Actual profitability would be nice, and with any luck, not only the 100+ of you who have shown faith and support will enjoy the work, but many others as well once each piece of it goes public and is available for sale.

      I won't promise that there won't be delays, nor that my day job and family life won't interfere from time to time. But I *can* promise that I'll deliver. And massive amounts of delivery, too. I'm somewhat proud of what DO1 accomplished, but even if it's not your style or interest, that book has dozens and dozens of fleshed-out NPCs with backstories; any one of them would be worth a few bucks as an indie PDF, and nearly all of them I feel are interesting enough to merit backstory adventures--hence the "Prior Lives" Stretch Goal.

      I've got dozens, and dozens, and dozens of books' worth of ideas; Kickstarting is frankly a way of making myself commit to, and follow through with, putting those ideas to paper lest they evaporate without effect. Not to reveal too much, but the entire Dark Obelisk Adventure Path is really a means of introducing the mythology of the known world to the PCs--and to the players and GM--and merely hints at a huge, elaborate, and fairly well-plotted-and-planned-out gaming universe comprising dozens of separate campaign settings and worlds. But I've said too much. :)

      I probably won't be launching another Kickstarter until after I'm able to deliver on the promises of this one. I suppose there's a possibility of having a KS whose goal is to enhance an existing promised product--"help fund dozens of pieces of full-color commissioned artwork for Echoes of Time Forgotten" could be a thing, I guess. If I think more about that route, I'd definitely do a survey for DO2 backers to see if that'd be of interest.

      But in terms of future plans, I'd summarize to say that the fact that the DO2 KS ended up being ten times as big as I had needed, it has two kind of conflicting impacts: First, it massively ups my passion and dedication to things. Second, it massively *delays* when my next KS will be, since I've now been able to fund what would otherwise have been at least a half-dozen separate KS campaigns!

      So. All of that said, the most helpful advice would be from backers or those who have seen the work of DO1 thus far... so I would encourage everyone from the DO1 KS to chime in if they have thoughts one way or the other for Paul (or other backers potentially on the fence about how best to pledge).

      Not sure if any of this truly helps... or maybe makes you even more cautious about pledging! But at least it's honest. ;)

    24. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 28, 2016

      Torolf--Congrats and thank you!!!!

    25. Torolf - Alchemist of the Obsidian Order on October 28, 2016

      Upped pledge by $10 to hit 10k at 10 hours to go.

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      Paul S. on October 28, 2016

      I have concerns about the sheer size of this project and the amount of time and effort it's going to take to pull off successfully, especially with such a small team. That said, I have backed at the Historian level and am happy to support this independent artistic effort.

      @ J. Evans Payne - You have some very ambitious plans for your world, and early on put out some estimates regarding future kickstarters. Can you speak any about how the growth and success of this kickstarter impacts your future plans?

      @ Everyone - I like what I see, but am hesitant increase my pledge more than it is. Any last minute persuasion on why I should increase it?

    27. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 27, 2016

      Stormraider--Oops! Oh man I'm sorry; the wording of things is really not accurate and is very confusing. I've posted an update that clarifies things, and I've amended the language.

      But in short, starting with the NPC Card decks, future Stretch Goals are merely "unlocked", not included... in ANY pledge levels. I certainly didn't mean to screw over my premium, most valued backers! :)

      So, yeah, to get EVERYTHING, it'll be expensive... but 26 products all told, including shipping... it's a pretty insane deal still.

      I do realize it's a lot of faith to place in an indie, one-man-shop author, so along the way, I'll probably figure out some way of letting backers scoop up content as it's published for a discount.

      Hope that helps! Thanks for the sharp eyes and question!

    28. Stormraider
      Superbacker
      on October 27, 2016

      @J. Evans Payne

      Heya, there! I was just perusing the list of Stretch Goals to see what new stuff, if any, had been added since last I checked, and I noticed that starting at the $7500 Stretch Goal and following thru the rest of the goals, the two Highest Pledge Levels don't receive ANY of those extras. Umm, what's up with that? Did I simply misunderstand?

      I mean I'm already pledging $200, as well as another $60 (I believe that's how much the DO1 hardcover is), so that's $260 right there. But if we hit any further Stretch Goals, I have to pay extra for them since I already have a high pledge...? Is that the gist of excluding the Hardened Completionist and the other Pledge Level from $7500-on Stretch Goal goodies, or am I just not cottoning on to something that seems to be readily apparent to everyone else? I did read thru the comments, and it looks like my comment, as of now, is the sole one asking about this.

      If you could explain things when you get an opportunity to do so, that would be lovely. And I really do want to get my hands on everything available, but I'm not sure I can afford to go over $300+ in order to do just that. Which would be terribly unfortunate, since everything I've seen of Dark Obelisk looks like so much fun.

      --Storm

    29. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 24, 2016

      Stormraider--Thanks to your perfectly-numbered pledge increase, yes! The last few stretch goals, we've hit the magic number, but then someone cancels or reduces their pledge, and I feel teased!

      So I'll wait until end of day to officially declare the Druids' cribz unlocked, but I think it's fair to assume at this point :)

    30. Stormraider
      Superbacker
      on October 24, 2016

      Woot! We hit $7000! Bring on the Druid stuff!

    31. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      No problem. I'd rather the questions flow now as opposed to once the campaign wraps up! :)

    32. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Figmentia--Sorry; to clarify, Hardened Historian gets hardcopies of DO1 and DO2. HH also gets PDFs of DO1 and DO2, and all applicable unlocked Stretch Goals. All of those are either in 5E *or* Pathfinder format. Hope that helps!

    33. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 21, 2016

      @j Evan yes I messed up the wording sorry so many questions a lot here as I wasn't involved in the First ks!

    34. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Figmentia--Hardened Historian gets hardcopies and PDFs of DO1, DO2, and all applicable unlocked Stretch Goals. All of those are either in 5E *or* Pathfinder format.

    35. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 21, 2016

      @j Evans I'm a hardened historian with hard cover of both base books does that mean I get PDF as well?

    36. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Figmentia--Historian gets EITHER 5E or Pathfinder PDFs, of DO1, DO2, and all applicable unlocked Stretch Goals. Universal Historian gets both 5E and PFRPG formats for all of those.

    37. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Figmentia--Everyone from Early Bird Citizen on up will get one format of PDFs, yes. Universal Historian gets BOTH 5E and PFRPG formats, *and* gets the DO1 PDFs as well. Hope that clarifies!

    38. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 21, 2016

      It says if I'm a historian on campaign page I get both do1 and do2 pdfs?

    39. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 21, 2016

      Withhhardened historian get pdfs of stretch goals I thought all about early bird citizen did?

    40. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Anthony--Hm... the Universal Historian will certainly give you 5E and PFRPG for the core DO1 and DO2 products... but I hadn't considered the impact of unlocked Stretch Goals.

      I've just updated the price and description of the Universal Historian pledge level; apologies at raising the price but I did want to reflect that you'd now be getting more than double the value than the original description contained.

      I'll also clarify this in the campaign description. Thanks for your question; good call!

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      Anthony
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      If I were looking to get every single possible pdf you're offering, for both pfrpg and 5e, including every stretch goal, is Universal Historian ($65) all I need to pledge towards?

    42. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Jamie--Glad it worked out for you early-bird! :)

      I may be horrible with timing estimates, but I try to excel at delivering content :).

    43. Jamie Van Lengen
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Cannot wait to get this as I upped my pledge to "Hardened Completist" before the Western Realms Gazeteer was unlocked. Was not expecting to get as much as I will. Totally understand the cap and will add on anything else I want at the end of the campaign.

    44. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 21, 2016

      Figmentia--Thanks! Work goes really, really fast when you're using fun tools. :)

    45. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 18, 2016

      Very impressive the whole 1000 page book in 6 months...

    46. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 18, 2016

      @j Evans thank you it just said part 1 so it confused me if there were more parts of the first path thank you!

    47. J. Evans Payne 6-time creator
      Superbacker
      on October 18, 2016

      @ FIGMENTIA(Daniel): There are several pledge levels that include Dark Obelisk 1 (DO1). "Historian" gets you pdfs of both DO1 and DO2, and "Hardened Historian" gets you the hard copies. Check out the pledge level descriptions for even more options!

    48. Charles Ulveling
      Superbacker
      on October 18, 2016

      Stoked about all of these stretch goals getting knocked out!

    49. FIGMENTIA(Daniel) on October 18, 2016

      Hello I'm new to this is I was wondering is there a pledge level that includes part 1?

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