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The greatest work IN English literature, now in the greatest format OF English literature: a chooseable-path adventure!
The greatest work IN English literature, now in the greatest format OF English literature: a chooseable-path adventure!
The greatest work IN English literature, now in the greatest format OF English literature: a chooseable-path adventure!
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Romeo and/or Juliet: Play as Juliet!

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Haha EVERYONE wanted Juliet!  Except the few that voted for Romeo, but to be fair it was pointed out to me that HE really wants Juliet too, so I supposed everyone is happy!

A word of warning: it’s a long one today! In the book, Juliet’s first few options are all side-by-side and don’t have any choices, to help share the sense that she’s trapped on her own life so you’ll both want to escape it as soon as you can. This works great in a book! It works less great when you can only read one page a day, so I’m gonna post her first few choices here until we get to a real one, and THEN we’ll decide what happens next.

PLAY AS JULIET

You are Juliet! Right now you’re sitting in your bedroom chatting with your nurse and only friend, Mrs. Angelica Nurse. YES, her last name is “Nurse” and she works as a nurse. Don’t judge, Juliet. It’s not like you haven’t capuleted a few times before.  

We’ve all seen it.

ANYWAY. Your nurse, “A. Nurse,” leaves you because it’s 9 a.m. and she has things to do, among them getting this house ready for the crazy party your parents are throwing tonight. Yes, a crazy party on a Sunday! Who throws a party on a Sunday night? The rich who don’t have to work, that’s who! This includes your parents, and, assuming they die without producing any male heirs, eventually you as well!

It’s time to start your day too, Juliet. You tear through some quick stomach crunches (three reps of ten) and some pec blasts (four reps of eight), and you’re ready to start your day. So! You’re well muscled and your family’s rich. What’s for breakfast?

Haha, just kidding. Your parents have already planned out your whole day for you weeks in advance. When you get downstairs, Mom and breakfast are already waiting for you. She puts your protein shake on the counter, tells you to drink it up, and leaves.

“Yes, Mom,” you say automatically.

  • Drink the protein shake

DRINK THE PROTEIN SHAKE

You reach for the protein shake and bring it to your lips. And because I’m sure you want to know what you’re drinking, let me give you the recipe!

Juliet’s Pro-Power Miracle Shake

Ingredients:

  • one pound of protein (animal flesh, basically; you get yours on standing order from the Merchant of Breakfast downtown)
  • milk 

Instructions:

  • 1. Add meat to giant glass. 
  • 2. Pour in milk until mixture is of desired milkiness. 
  • 3. Shake vigorously. 
  • 4. Enjoy!

It’s about as good as it sounds. And it sounds great!!

You chug down breakfast quickly and efficiently, wiping your mouth with the back of a well-muscled arm, and you’re off to start your day! Time to grab this day by the horns and wrestle it into submission!!

Only, at this point your mom sticks her head in and says, “Juliet, would you be a dear and clean your room?”

“Yes Mom,” you say automatically.

  • Go clean your room

GO CLEAN YOUR ROOM

You go upstairs and clean your room, Juliet, just as you were told. When you’re done you shout downstairs to your mom.

“I’m done cleaning, Mom!” you shout. 

“Good girl!” she replies. “Please sit there and do your lute homework until I call for you.” 

“Yes Mom,” you say automatically. 

You spend several hours practicing on your lute. Yesterday your mom said that if you get good enough at it she’ll allow you to perform at one of their parties. You don’t even like the lute that much, but the idea did get you a little excited. Of course, in her next breath she said you were nowhere near good enough at lute yet and doubled the number of pieces you have to learn by the end of the week. 

After a while you hear your mother calling up to you. “That’s enough, Juliet!” she shouts, probably tired of hearing the first few bars of “Minor-Key Study Piece for Intermediate Lute Students #52” over and over again. “You’ve got two hours of personal time now, but don’t leave the castle!” 

“Yes Mom!” you say, super excited. Any free time you get is the best time of your day! And that’s not saying much, actually! 

But enough about that sad stuff: it’s time to have some FRIGGIN’ FUN. 

  • Go have fun

GO HAVE FUN

So, the thing is, you’re not allowed out of the house, and everyone’s busy with prepping for the party. Even your nurse can’t talk to you right now.

You flex your way downstairs to the servants’ kitchen and ask if there’s anything you can do to help out, and while you DO help them open up a few tricky jars, it only takes half an hour at most to go through every tricky jar you can find. Soon all the jars are opened and you’re surreptitiously screwing on a few lids super tight so at least you’ll have something to do tomorrow morning.

It’s pretty boring, Juliet! I should’ve told you this sooner, but your life is pretty boring these days. All days, really. The sad fact is, it’s boring to live in a castle with your parents where nothing interesting happens and you got big into muscles because then at least you’d have something to do while standing around bored for hours (that something is building muscles).

So that’s what you do (you go work out so that you might maintain your existing muscles and maybe get better ones too), and before you know it your free time is almost over and it’s time to go back into your room.

  • Finish your workout

FINISH YOUR WORKOUT

You gingerly put down the weights you were blasting and wipe down your workout equipment. Then you change out of your wet and sweaty and gross and stinky and entirely unsexy “Juliet workout tights” and into your much less sweaty and at least slightly sexier “Juliet hanging-around-the-castle tights” with your favorite red dress on top.

You’re just pulling it on when you hear Angelica calling for you. “In a minute!” you reply, but a few seconds later you can hear your mom and Angelica outside your door. Your mom is asking where you are, and Angelica is saying that she already called for you.

“I called for her already! I swear I did! I swear on my virginity at age twelve!” she says, which is kinda weird and a little bit pervy.

“That was kinda weird and a little bit pervy,” you mutter to yourself, making the final adjustments to your dress. You leave your bedroom and greet your mother and nurse waiting outside your door.

“Guys, calm down, I’m here,” you say. “What do you want?”

Your mom sends your nurse away. “Juliet and I must talk privately,” she says.

“Okay,” Angelica says, leaving.

“Wait, I just remembered, actually you’re allowed to hear our secrets,” your mom says.

“Okay,” Angelica says, returning.

“Wait, before we start,” your mom says, “POP QUIZ: how old is my only child?”

You’d like to say she’s testing your nurse, but you’re not entirely convinced your mom actually knows.

  • Let Angelica answer

LET ANGELICA ANSWER

Angelica says your 17th birthday will be this July 31 (hey, that’s only a few weeks away! EXCITING) and she knows it down to the hour because her own child, Susan, was born that very same day.

SPOILER ALERT: Angelica tends to go on a bit, so I’m gonna cut this down to just the highlights because nobody’s getting paid by the word here. Brevity is the soul of wit! That’s a saying you can attribute to ME, the author of this crazy branching novel. Make sure nobody else steals it.

So! Here are the Angelica highlights:

  • you were born July 31, and she knows because her own baby was born the same day
  • that baby is named Susan (nice name)  
  • that baby is dead now (WHOAH, DANG YO)
  • there was an earthquake on your birthday 14 years ago (irrelevant information, feel free to forget this right . . . now)
  • you stopped breast-feeding on that very day (okay, that’s fine)
  • she put wormwood on her nipple to wean you (okay, whatever, let’s move on)
  • this made you mad at her breast and you and the breast had a falling-out (how are we still talking about this)
  • the day before the combination earthquake/weaning, you fell while walking and bruised your face and Angelica’s husband picked you up to comfort you
  • her husband is dead now too (OH WELL)
  • her husband asked you if you fell forward on your face, and then asked if when you grew up you’d “fall backwards” instead
  • what the heck?! That’s a sex euphemism!
  • her late husband made sex jokes to a three-year-old child
  • may I just reiterate, what the heck?!
  • SERIOUSLY!
  • seriously
  • anyway, three-year-old you said “Yes!” to this question that you could not possibly understand and it was SO HILARIOUS that here we are talking about it OVER A DECADE LATER

At this point your mom (TOTALLY of her own volition and not because I’m getting tired of this myself) asks Angelica to be quiet, which she eventually does, but not before adding:

  • the bruise on your head was as big as a rooster’s testicle

WOW. You want to end this here, Juliet?

  • OPTION “CHANGE THE SUBJECT”: In which you ask them what they want to talk to you about 
  • OPTION “LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE”: In which you say “Wait, hold on, I don’t really have the context for the rooster’s-testicle thing. How big are we talking about here?”

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Vote in the comments (and I love the rhyming couplet votes, thank you for everyone who does them!) and we'll see the winning choice tomorrow!

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    1. Missing avatar

      Kevin Ryan on May 14, 2016

      Change the subject.

    2. Stephen Walker Jr. on May 12, 2016

      Is this really a choice? Rooster science obviously.

    3. Missing avatar

      Christopher Hoogeboom on May 12, 2016

      Rooster science all day long

    4. Scerttle on May 12, 2016

      Clearly rooster testicles.

    5. Missing avatar

      Heather Kingsley on May 12, 2016

      Learn Rooster Science please ^.^

    6. Travis Jay on May 12, 2016

      Hit me with some of that Rooster Science

    7. Matt Crawford on May 12, 2016

      This entire talk has been too strange;
      Methinks the subject ought to change.

    8. Craig Kozeluh on May 12, 2016

      O fair Eliza! Mark as I am slain,
      Though clepèd as a bot we knew in youth,
      Thou lay’st before us - well beyond the main -
      A mastery of speech and writ, forsooth!

      This humble wordwright durst not take a bow,
      When thy electrons offer wit enow.

    9. Rebecca Newman
      Superbacker
      on May 12, 2016

      I think discussing cocks' ball-size seems like the best course here.

    10. Missing avatar

      Eliza on May 12, 2016

      To Capulets, a capon’s best to eat.
      If Juliet is hid from the straight dope,
      Young rooster Romeo she’ll hap to meet
      With knowledge bare. What context can she hope
      To place against him, seen in just his socks?
      Though always frank, A. Nurse is not a fool.
      Less-doting mother squirms to speak of cocks,
      But Nurse knows better: if there’ll be a duel
      Of wits, this leads to better dueling still.
      She’ll pity not. Let awkward SCIENCE swell,
      For backwards-falling girls must know their fill,
      And truth will out - protective mums must tell.

      If truth be beauty, so be beauty truth:
      To speak of TESTES will improve our youth.

    11. Missing avatar

      theguth on May 11, 2016

      Let's lean rooster science. I bet those testes are giants!

    12. Jonathan Stein on May 11, 2016

      Rooster Science!

    13. Missing avatar

      Jonathan Bagelman
      Superbacker
      on May 11, 2016

      That rooster thing is kinda weird and pervy.
      Change the subject to something less nervy.

    14. Missing avatar

      Steph on May 11, 2016

      Change the subject

    15. Philhouse
      Superbacker
      on May 11, 2016

      Science of roosters is what I desire,
      Let me assure you I am not a liar.

    16. Mary-Ann Wyatt on May 11, 2016

      Option "Change The Subject" Please.

    17. Remus on May 11, 2016

      Rooster science, why is this even a question

    18. Nancy Pegher on May 11, 2016

      I'm not good at rhymes
      But I would totes like to votes
      For rooster science

    19. Sasha on May 11, 2016

      LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE!

    20. Corey Palmer on May 11, 2016

      It would make me smile from wall to wall to learn some more of rooster balls!
      In fact I stand with 5 or so clients, who also shout for option LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE!

    21. Missing avatar

      Aaron Hilton on May 11, 2016

      Resolve ignorance: LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE

    22. Missing avatar

      Denise on May 11, 2016

      rooster testicles FTW

    23. Missing avatar

      GlobalCooldown on May 11, 2016

      Rooster Science, of course.

    24. Shannon Sturgeon on May 11, 2016

      option "learn rooster science."

      I mean is this even a question.

    25. RaMus on May 11, 2016

      Obligatory LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE vote.

    26. Missing avatar

      Kelly Burkhardt on May 11, 2016

      Learn Rooster Science - I too am not familiar with rooster testicles and could use the education

    27. Terence Chandler on May 11, 2016

      Must. LEARN. ROOSTER. SCIENCE.

    28. Craig Kozeluh on May 11, 2016

      A bump as big as a young cockerel’s stone?
      In faith, no capon have I ever made,
      Beheld I not the deed after it’s done,
      Nor yet partaken, deep in oil laid.

      To learn, I burn within, my skull aflame,
      And only this can ever quench my passion:
      The knowledge bold that I do hold and claim
      Lies short of rooster ball size, now my mission.

      What fool could fly the chance to fill his cup
      With wine of truth, crushed from Minerva’s vine,
      A deeper draft than Bacchus’ e’er put up,
      When pitcher now before him does incline?

      Then build we an unbreakable alliance,
      ‘Sblood, I demand the Option Rooster Science!

    29. KLAWLOR on May 11, 2016

      LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE

    30. Matthew Smith on May 11, 2016

      Option "Learn Rooster Science"!

    31. Missing avatar

      Devin on May 11, 2016

      Change the subject. We are in English to ESCAPE science!

    32. Renee on May 11, 2016

      CHANGE THE SUBJECT! no one likes talking about bird balls.

    33. Missing avatar

      Kristina Pistone on May 11, 2016

      Let's learn some rooster science!

    34. Missing avatar

      Jack Aldridge on May 11, 2016

      Rooster Science

    35. c k on May 11, 2016

      To be trapped in a castle
      Where others think they know best
      Is an unpleasant hassle
      So my vote is to GO WEST

    36. Josh Syl Wyant on May 11, 2016

      I want to learn about some roosters!

    37. Missing avatar

      Guilherme Carvalho on May 11, 2016

      How is this even a question? ROOSTER SCIENCE is the only real answer here. Juliet is actually still trapped in non-choices, except this time it's awesome. :D

    38. Missing avatar

      sara on May 11, 2016

      Oh lordy please change the subject

    39. Missing avatar

      Nicholas Bond on May 11, 2016

      Rooster Science!

    40. Michael Jeffers on May 11, 2016

      To learn of rooster science
      You have my full compliance

    41. Missing avatar

      Charlie Reavette on May 11, 2016

      LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE

      Our brain is a muscle too.

    42. dwsparks on May 11, 2016

      Alex, I'll take ROOSTER SCIENCE for $300

    43. Neville Fogarty on May 11, 2016

      After working out your arms and chesties
      Let's all talk about a rooster's testes.

    44. Alyssa Jackson on May 11, 2016

      Option: Change the subject!

    45. Pablo Soares on May 11, 2016

      Rooster testicles could be a new source of protein! GO GO GO!

    46. Missing avatar

      Geoffrey on May 11, 2016

      Rooster Science!

    47. Kevin Saunders
      Superbacker
      on May 11, 2016

      Rooster science!

    48. Missing avatar

      Lukas Daniel Klausner
      Superbacker
      on May 11, 2016

      Roosters all the way.

    49. Michael Patrick Cutillo on May 11, 2016

      OPTION “LEARN ROOSTER SCIENCE”