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"La Ragazza Incompleta" nasce da un piccolo fatto quotidiano: svegliarsi senza un calzino dopo una bella notte di sonno. E se quel calzino non fosse più nel letto con noi, dove potrebbe essere finito? E se ci fosse qualcuno al quale, per tutta la vita, senza che se ne rendesse conto, fosse venuto a mancare qualcosa? Dove potrebbero essere finiti tutti quegli oggetti?

Questa è l'idea di base della storia. Tre capitoli che porteranno la nostra protagonista, Ann, a vivere un'avventura che mai si sarebbe aspettata.

Soggetto e sceneggiatura sono scritti da Flavio Salvatori e gli intriganti disegni sono opera di Anna Diaz. 

Gli Autori

Flavio, perito chimico rubato all'ottica, ha la passione per la narrazione la scrittura. Per anni si è divertito a raccontare storie per giochi di ruolo ed ha scritto l'ultima avventura dei personaggi che ha visto crescere nel romanzo fantasy intitolato "L'ancora del tempo". Ha avuto altre collaborazioni nel campo del fumetto proponendo soggetti a case editrici italiane ed arrivando secondo in un concorso nazionale sulle pagine del mensile Tomb Rider.

Anna ha una formazione solida nel mondo del disegno e della computer grafica. Le sue capacità le hanno permesso di collaborare con Lucasfilm, Abridge ed Hasbro per il Force Clash di Star Wars in Italia. Ha realizzato lo storyboard del corto “To the moon and back” di Enrico Vannini, intermezzi animati per il corto: “Supemmen unni si?”, i trailer e l'animazione per il documentario sui transgender “O sei uomo o sei donna...chiaro?”, la sigla della web series “Crea & Decora con Amore” di Donna Moderna e le animazioni educative per aziende come Akzo Nobel, Bio Tech Engineering & Consulting e Federico Motta Editore. Nel campo del fumetto ha già debuttato con “Uomini, mezzi uomini e ominicchi” per l'associazione Addio Pizzo. Oltre i confini nazionali, sue sono le scenografie dello spettacolo “Skreek” di Giovanni Juss, in scena a Vienna, in Austria. Diplomata allo IED, è un affascinante talento in attesa di stupirvi con il suo tratto intrigante.

Caratteristiche

Il nostro fumetto, ogni numero di 80 pagine, sarà principalmente in bianco e nero con alcune pagine della storia a colori. Sarà, anche, disponibile in due versioni cartacee: la prima in brossura di circa 246 pagine con copertina a colori inedita, la seconda in tre albi indipendenti, con delle caratteristiche tipografiche decisamente interessanti, contenuti in un elegante cofanetto. 

Il fumetto sarà disponibile per tutti i finanziatori in formato digitale ed in tre lingue: italiano, inglese e francese. La versione cartacea sarà realizzata solo in italiano e le spese di spedizione per la copia fisica ed i gadget sono incluse nell'offerta solo per il mercato italiano. Per tutti gli altri Paesi siete pregati di chiederci un preventivo.

“The Incomplete Girl” was born from a simple fact. That sometimes, when we wake from a nights slumber, we are missing a sock. The question is, if the sock is no longer in the bed with us, how did it disappear, and where did it end up? What if someone existed who has been losing things their entire life without realising it, and where could all of these objects have ended up? From this question, our story springs to life. Three chapters that will lead our protagonist, Ann, in an adventure she would never have expected. Story, and screenplay are written by Flavio Salvatori, and the intriguing designs are created by Anna Diaz. 

The Authors

Flavio is a chemist who has a passion for narrative writing. For years his passion grew while he created stories for RPG’s culminating in the adventures found within the fantasy novel “L’ancora del tempo”. He has collaborated with numerous Italian publishers in the comics industry, and placed second in a national competition on the pages of the monthly “Tomb Raider”.

Anna has a solid education in Design and computer graphics. This has afforded her the experiences of working with Lucasfilm, Abridge, and Hasbro for the “Force clash” Star wars event in Italy. Her work includes creating the storyboard for the short film “To the moon and back” by Enrico Vannini, animated interludes for the short “Supermen unni si?”, the trailer and the animations for the documentary “O sei uomo o sei donna...Chiaro?”, the trailer for the web series “Crea & Decora con Amore” by Donna Moderna, and animations for educational companies such as Azko Nobel, Bio Tech Engineering and Consulting and Federico Motta Editore. In the world of comics, she made her debut with “Uomini, mezzi uomini e ominicchi” for the association Addio Pizzo. On an international level, she created the scenes of “Skreek”, a Giovanni Juss play in Vienna, Austria. A graduate of IED, she is an intriguing talent waiting to surprise you. 

Characteristics

Our comics, each issue of 80 pages, will be mainly in black and white with some color pages of history. It will also be available in two paper versions. The first is paperback. This will be about 246 pages with color cover. the second in three independent albums with soft touch cover, contained in an elegant slipcase and with very interesting typographical characteristics. For both editions the measurements of the issues will be 16x23 cm. 

The comic will be available in digital format to all backers and in three languages: Italian, English and French. The printed version will be released only in Italian. The shipping costs for the physical copy and the gadgets are included in the offer for the Italian market only. For all other countries please ask for a quote.

Transaltion by Jim Tuohy

“La Ragazza Incompleta” est née d’un petit fait quotidien: se réveiller sans une chaussette après une nuit de bon sommeil. Et si cette chaussette n’était plus dans le lit avec nous, ou pourrait-elle être finie? Et s’il y avait quelqu’un à qui pour toute la vie, sans le savoir, était venu à manquer quelque chose? Où pourraient être allé toutes ces choses? De là, notre histoire. Trois chapitres qui emmèneront notre protagoniste, Ann, dans une aventure qu’elle ne se serait jamais attendue. Histoire et scénario ont été écrit par Flavio Salvatori et les dessins intrigants sont l’œuvre d’Anna Diaz.

Auteurs 

Flavio, chimiste volé à l’optique, a une passion pour l’écriture narrative. Pendant beaucoup d’années il a eu le plaisir de raconter histoires pour les jeux de rôle et il a raconté la dernière aventure des personnages qu’il a vu grandir dans « L’ancora del tempo ». Il a eu d’autre collaborations dans la bande dessinée en proposant l’objet a beaucoup d’éditeurs italiens, il est arrive deuxième dans un concours national sur les pages du mensuel Tomb Rider.

Anna a une solide formation dans le monde du design et de l'infographie. Ses compétences lui ont permis de travailler avec Lucasfilm, Abridge et Hasbro pour la Force Clash of Star Wars en Italie. Elle a fait le storyboard du court-métrage "To the moon and back" Enrico Vannini, d'intermèdes animés pour le court: “Supemmen unni si?”, le trailer et l'animation pour le documentaire sur les transgender “O sei uomo o sei donna...chiaro?”, le web jingle pour “Crea & Decora con Amore” de Donna Moderna et les animations éducatives pour les enterprises telles quelle Akzo Nobel, Bio Tech Engineering & Consulting et Federico Motta Editore. Dans le domaine de la bande dessinée, elle a déjà fait ses débuts avec "Uomini, mezzi uomini e ominicchi" pour l'association Addio Pizzo. Au-delà des frontières nationales, elle a crée la scénographie pour le spectacle "Skreek" de Giovanni Juss, en concert à Vienne en Autriche. Diplômée au IED, Anne est un talent fascinant dans l’attente de Vous surprise avec son voie intrigant.

Caractéristiques

Nos bandes dessinées, chaque numéro de 80 pages, seront principalement en blanc et noir avec quelques pages de l'histoire a couleur. Il sera aussi disponible en deux versions papier: le premier livre de poche d'environ 246 pages avec couverture de couleur inédit e le deuxième livre en trois albums indépendants, avec une typographie très intéressant, contenu dans un élégant étui. Pour les deux éditions la taille sera 16x23 cm. La bande dessinée sera disponible pour tous les bailleurs en format numérique et en trois langues: italien, anglais et français. La version papier sera seulement écrite en italien et les coûts d'expédition pour la copie physique et les gadgets seront inclus dans l'offre seulement pour le marché italien. Pour tous les autres pays s'il vous plaît demander un devis.

 Traduction par Paola Viscardi

Per tutti coloro che ci hanno sostenuto con un contributo da 120€ in su una statua 3D di uno dei personaggi. Realizzati in pari numero, selezione casuale.

For all those who have supported us with a pledge from 120 € a 3D statue of one of the main characters. Made in equal numbers, random selection.

Pour tous ceux qui nous ont soutenus avec un contribution de 120 €  ou plus une statue en 3D d'un des personnages. Fabriqués en nombre égal, sélection aléatoire.

Per ora è un segreto.

For the moment this is a secret.

Pour le moment, cela est un secret.

Oh! WOW!

Gadget

 How we spend the money

Risks and challenges

I rischi per l'investitore sono veramente bassi. Le sceneggiature dei tre numeri sono complete. Il primo numero è completamente disegnato. Il secondo è a buon punto ed il terzo ha lo storyboard pronto. I fornitori di gadget sono stati identificati e sono affidabili. La spedizione del volume cartaceo, e dei gadget, avverrà in contemporanea con l'uscita dell'ultimo numero digitale: novembre 2016. E' un lavoro impegnativo, supportateci.

The risks for the investor are really low. The scripts of the three numbers are completed. The first number is completely drawn. The second is well advanced and the third has the storyboard ready. Suppliers of gadgets have been identified and are reliable. The shipment of the printed volume, and gadgets, will coincide with the last issue digital: November 2016. It's big job, support us.

Les risques pour l’acheteur sont vraiment bas. Les scenarios de tous les trois numéros sont complets. Le premier numéro est complètement dessiné. Le deuxième est bien avancé el le story board du troisième est prêt. Les fournisseurs de gadgets ont été identifiés et sont fiables. L’expédition du livre relié et des gadgets aura lieu simultanément avec la sortie du dernier numéro en version numérique: novembre 2016. C'est un travail exigeant, nous soutiennent.

It's a great job. Stay with us!

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