by Emergent Games
Hey, I read through the manual. There is a lot of grey boxes which seem placeholders I hope we will be kept in the loop on updates to the rulebook.
On a second note the following things I noticed that may require clarification:
Page 10, Searching "Turn the token face down"
in the beginning you show the token having only heads, no tails. the only difference being the color blue/red. So I wouldn't state it as face down. blue side up or something more concise appears more persistent with the tokens nature.
Page 11, Monster Movement: "...according to its speed" I could not find a comprehensive card analysis in the manual showing what is what on a monster card. In addition I think the action cards merit a little more explaining since they are two-fold. I'm imagining something akin to whats in the manual for say netrunner. Showing one card per card type and numbering what everything is, thus making it concise and extensive.
Page 16. You did not end the sentence: "You do not receive this bonus when" assisting according to what I understood from the manual.
finally I would like to see it progress a little more, the smaller columns on each side are really hard to put in the order of the page, maybe they should be framed.
All in all it is well put together, and explains the game for the most part.
Can't wait for the final draft and the game after that.