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No Map Yet, But Soon...

Posted by Richard Thomas (Creator)
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I was holding off with this Update because we are soooo close to having the Map of Creation ready to show you and I kept thinking that the next revision would be the finished version. But, not yet. Jared is working on my last comments, and I promise as soon as it's done I'll post it to an Update even if I get it on Christmas Day.  

Here's a look at how the EX3 text is progressing:  

From Holden: "More playtest-based combat Charm revisions and core tweaks, mostly for clarity. We set Lore aside (not completed yet) to do one big push through the social Charms first-- starting with Socialize. The big movement this week has been on sorcery, which is going to get its rough draft finished in the next couple of days."  

Holden wanted to emphasize, and did on FB this week, that it is really gratifying to see how their new Charm designs are working, and that the changes they are making after the playtests are mostly to make wording clearer rather than imbalances or broken Charms..  

I've started working with art director Maria Cabardo on the first Chapter- like I said last Update, the Exalted in this chapter are intended to be an inspirational explosion of gorgeous art that works as both an intro to the types of Exalted in Creation for new players, and also to demonstrate to experienced Exalted players just what's there so everyone can immediately grasp how EX3 has evolved from previous editions.  

The EX3 Novels are in the pitch/outline phases, and the EX3 Comic has been sketched out. Composer James Semple (he created the music we used in the KS video) is composing for the EX3 Music Suites. He has spoken about creating video blogs of their progress and I'll share those links with you as soon as I get them.  

We're going to be working through the holidays on our different parts of the project, and hope all of you stay happy and safe through the New Year!

Here is another sample of the Chapter Fiction going into EX3:

Prince Diamond glided across the churning surface of the river, his footfalls meeting the water as though it were smooth, solid stone. The chieftain of the Cloud Wolf Tribe lagged behind him on the winding course of the river’s banks, creeping warily for fear of the cursed ground he walked upon. “Move a little faster, Six­Fangs. Otherwise, you’ll more likely die of old age than anything else.” The wolfman responded with a grudging snarl of assent and hastened his pace, though he still couldn’t keep pace with the straight path the Eclipse Caste walked down the face of the river. Diamond sighed. He would have found better conversation with his horse Ember, but the steed was no more able to walk on water than Six­Fangs. Still, if long silences were the worst they faced on this journey, he would count it as lucky.

By the time the sun had moved halfway towards setting on the western horizon, Prince Diamond and Six­Fangs had reached the river’s once­hallowed origin, a waterfall cascading down from a small mountain peak. The wolfman eyed the falls warily, but there would be no need to make that climb. The gods did not live in the sky, as the superstitious chieftain presumed, nor would Prince Diamond be so rude as to intrude upon the river spirit’s sanctum. Instead, he would call the god to him. He drew a sheet of colorful paper out of his robes and folded it into the shape of a crude boat, then began to speak into it— strange words, in a tongue the wolfman knew not. Then, the Eclipse Caste laid the boat upon the water, where the raging turmoil of the water dragged it under in mere seconds. A faint glimmer of blue, like glinting sapphires on the riverbed, told him that his call had been heard.

The river spirit emerged from the water with slow grandeur, towering over them both in a form of bracken and black water that wore a porcelain mask for its face. “Who would have words with Yanamo? Who intrudes upon my peace?” Six­Fangs raised his hackles at this manifestation, stumbling backwards in fear, but the Eclipse Caste remained composed. “I am Prince Diamond, an envoy on behalf of the Cloud Wolf Tribe. It seems that the bridges across your river have somehow been swept away in the past few months, and its waters become entirely impassable. They would ask, humbly, that you calm the river, and let them cross over to the hunting grounds on the other side of the shore, as they have for years before now. Certainly, that can be arranged.”

The god spat in contempt, hacking up a glob of sludge onto the riverbanks. “What does Yanamo care for such trifles? Let them starve, let them eat—they will all die in the end. All of them, just like White Eyes. My river rages with my grief, envoy, and you have not the words to quell either. Begone.” Prince Diamond had no idea who White Eyes was, but the way the wolfman’s ears had perked up when he heard the name told him all he needed to know. The god had taken a priestess­wife from the Cloud Wolf Tribe—hardly an unusual arrangement—and forgotten his bride’s mortality, until she died.

“My condolences. I suppose there is nothing to be done, then. I will leave you—the Immaculate Order is nigh, and I must keep far afield of their hunt.” He turned to leave, waiting for the river­spirit to break the silence. “Wait,” said the god, his voice quavering just enough to betray his fears. “The Immaculates—are they truly coming?” The Eclipse Caste grinned, but composed his face into a mask of calm before turning back to face the god. “As we speak, I assure you. Their reach has spread even to these hinterlands, it seems. But you are mighty enough to contend with the Dragon­Blooded, no?” The river­ god hung his head in silent resignation. “Well then, perhaps we could strike a bargain. The Cloud Wolf Tribe has worshipped you for years. With your blessings, and your river at their back, perhaps they could stand against Immaculate Order. But of course, it is hard to fight on an empty stomach—”

“Very well,” said the god. At Prince Diamond’s beckoning, Six­Fangs came forth, placing his clawed hand within the immensity of the god’s own outstretched hand. “So long as the Cloud Wolf Tribe stands in my defense, they will have safe passage across my river, and my blessings in war.” As the god spoke, the words of his pledge scribed themselves into the air, burning with the white­gold fire of Prince Diamond’s anima as the Solar willed it to sanctify the oath, shining like reflected stars on the water’s face.

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    1. Lydia ☯ on

      The Charm that PD uses to pick up on the unspoken social dynamics revealed a lot more detail than I would have expected. Cool.

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      Alex Yang on

      I liked the story. The prose was a bit too much on the purple side, but I guess that's to be expected in Exalted.

    3. Cadwyn on

      Very nice fiction piece, and a great example of using social influence in a positive manner. I wish the developers and all who have put untold hours into this project the very best this holiday season!

    4. Joachim Mander on

      I am very happy with all the effort You are putting into my favorite RPG. Furthermore, having a great artist Who paints the map of my own RPG setting myself, I just can't wait to see the exalted map. My girlfriend and I already have prepared a place in our living room to put it.

      Oh and I'd like to use this opportunity to thank you developers. Without you and Exalted our RPG sessions wouldn't have been as good as they were. Over the years I made awesome friends thanks to you and Exalted. I think it was especially Exalted (which in the beginning I found stupid) and the resulting discussions that made my girlfriend (soon bride) fall in love with me.

      I wish you to become incredibly rich through Exalted. If nothing else please Do never forget that your hard work and dedication changed at least one life. In the most significant way :)

      Glory to the Scarlet Empress!

    5. WuseMajor
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      As for the fiction, I like it as well. Prince Diamond is doing some nice stuff here.

      Hmmm... Given the state of the text, would doing more fiction spoilers be feasible? It lets you give us more information about what the Exalted can do, without having to deal with the issues that come along with explaining part of a system.

    6. WuseMajor
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      I understand the need to wait on sending the survey until later, I lament that it means I can't get my add ons of the 1e pdfs until later.

    7. Eric Schalk on

      So I know the release is "when its done" but can we get a rough estimate, like will it be done by spring, summer, etc

    8. Eric Schalk on

      So I know the release is "when its done" but can we get a rough estimate, like will it be done by spring, summer, etc

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      Simon Geard on

      I like it. The fiction is reminiscent of similar Eclipse scenes in both 1e and 2e, but feels fresh.

      And I *am* pleased to see the use of fiction in this edition rather than the comics of 2e... the latter weren't too bad, but I prefer it this way...

    10. Holden Lee Shearer on

      @Jeff - Somehow all the dashes have vanished from the text :(

      I suspect Getimians are to blame. Alternately, the Cloud Wolf Tribe may not have mastered this advanced form of punctuation.

    11. Holden Lee Shearer on

      @Matthew - Your address will be confirmed when the backer survey goes out, I believe, and you'll be able to change it then. (This is why it hasn't already gone out! Rich can only send the survey once.)

    12. Jeffrey Bauer on

      Typo in the first three sentences: "“Move a little faster, Six­Fangs. Otherwise, !!!you’ll more!!! likely die of old age than anything else.”"

      Good stuff though!

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      Christian on

      Ah nice update,I figured the hold-up was the waiting time for the map to finish, as it was mentioned in the MM notes. And a nice story too.

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      Matthew Walker on

      If I've recently changed addresses, how do I change it for this kickstarter?

    15. David Ford on

      Excellent update, thanks! Really love the new fiction...

    16. Holden Lee Shearer on

      The release date is "as soon as it's ready." Which we're hustling on as best we can-- we want the book to be worth the $684K people pledged for it, and then some.

      I promise, we want it out even worse than you do :p But we want it all done, shiny, and properly playtested. No more SCROLL OF ERRATA.

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      David Carriger on

      Thanks for the update. Since it seems fairly unlikely at this point that the PDF will be available this month, do you have new estimates for when the PDF and survey will be going out?