by Chris Booker
Rather lovely. I look forward to being a part of this project.
* The transitions seem a little rushed - you hardly have time to read the text, let alone see the pictures.
* You have an 'atmopshere' quite early on.
Apart from that, well done.
Ah, this comment! I have to say I only put it together quite quickly and only using windows movie maker. Not really my field of expertise....!
I just feel things should be a little slower. Read the text, look at the picture, dream, repeat.
I don't get the chance to read your text let alone anything else.