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Camelot Unchained is a counter-revolutionary RvR-focused MMORPG from Mark Jacobs and CSE set in a post-apocalyptic yet familiar world.
Camelot Unchained is a counter-revolutionary RvR-focused MMORPG from Mark Jacobs and CSE set in a post-apocalyptic yet familiar world.
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Afternoon Update - August 5th 2013

Folks,

Another goodness filled update for you on this beautiful Monday morning (well, at least here in Fairfax, Va.).  First, let’s review last week’s road map.

  • Complete deployment of a first pass of Camelot Unchained networking code with documentation. Yes Virginia, sometimes programmers do actually document their code. Status: Completed.
  • First pass at main server loop for Camelot Unchained. This is not the F# code that was used for SmackHammer but an all-new server loop. Status: Completed.
  • Internal testing of a first pass at a CSE patching system. This system will be developed using SmackHammer and eventually deployed for Camelot Unchained. Status: Completed.
  • Internal testing of a first pass of our account editor for Camelot Unchained. We’re almost there so hopefully by the end of the week we’ll be able to say that we can edit accounts more easily than we currently can. Status: Completed.
  • Update to the Camelot Unchained website. We’re almost finished with a quick revamp of this so I expect that this will be an easy one to make. Status: Mostly completed with the programming team awaiting some guidance from me.
  • Internal testing of the UI/web interface. We hope to have C++/Javascript communication working so we can push data to the JS layer.  That's one of the most important parts of the UI that will let us expose things like player health, party members, and other game data to the UI.  We also hope to break the UI up into smaller more modular frames than we are currently using. Status: Completed. 
  • Complete first art pass at the next race for Camelot Unchained. We have two possibilities right now (both are Arthurians) and one of them is definitely a little easier than the other but we’ll see. One draws heavily on a Scottish legend while the other, well, it’s different and also not so different at the same time. Status: Completed.
  • Continuing work on main animation system for Camelot Unchained. This is an ongoing process and while there isn’t anything cool to show yet, it’s important groundwork for the game. Status: Completed.
  • Continuing work on the building system for the game. As per above, nothing exciting to show yet but things continue to move forward. Status: Completed.
  • Continuing work on SmackHammer client and server as needed. Status: No work was done on SH other than on the patching system.
  • Next Becoming™ story for one of the two Arthurian races mentioned above. Status: Completed.
  • Complete first pass of updated levels for free version of March on Oz. Status: Completed.

Not a bad week. :)

As to this week’s roadmap, some of the things are the same but there are also some new entries to the list.  As always, we are including all of our major doings here, even if they aren’t related directly to Camelot Unchained.

  • First pass at technical roadmap for some key features of Camelot Unchained.
  • Continuing integration of UI/Web. Implement two-way communication between client and web server.
  • Continuing work on SmackHammer-based patcher.
  • Bring new programmer up to speed, work on implementation of new interface for particle system.
  • Implementation of early stages of new animation system via code.
  • Next revision of the new Arthurian race. Possible final version for Friday but most likely next week.
  • Limited design work on UI artwork for demo purposes.
  • Final pass at Hamadryad model, possible animation and rigging by Friday but most likely next week.
  • New Community Manager comes online by end of the week. 
  • First pass at Becoming™ story for another possible Arthurian race.
  • Internal testing of new March on Oz free version for iOS and Android (no in-game store yet).
  • Final revision of our Company Handbook with legal and team.
  • Continuing discussions with certain hardware/software folks for possible partnership deals.

Today also marked our first “2 for 1” day for new employees. Joining our crew are Renee Machyousky and James Brown. Renee will be acting as our Community Manager and also replace the irreplaceable Anna Luu when Anna’s husband's assignment in the U.S. Armed Forces takes him out of the Washington, D.C.  Mail carriers, delivery folks and cold-callers will rejoice since nobody messed with our Anna (well, and survived). Fortunately for us, Anna will still be working with us, albeit remotely and we will all miss her terribly. James is joining us a Gameplay Engineer and has won the contest for “Coolest Programmer Name Evar!” hands down. Next week our Producer will be joining us after he completes his cross-country move.

The final part of today’s update is the introduction of our next possible race, the Arthurian Stormriders. I conceived them as a human race with a cool backstory that also drew on and echoed some of the Arthurian legends (albeit in a very general way). There’s definitely some “read between the lines” stuff in there and, I think, a pretty cool race. As a bonus, this is the first story that has been edited/worked on by someone in addition to myself. This story had a volunteer copy/developmental editor who worked with me on the material and I hope, this time, you all enjoy the story and the writing style itself.  She did a great job and I couldn't be more pleased with the end result!

The Stormriders
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Come and sit, friends, and l will tell you a tale of Arthur’s most trusted subjects, the Children of the Lake, also known far and wide as the fearless Stormriders. While other mortals cower and flee before the Veilstorms, the Stormriders embrace their coming and stand before them in defiance. Despite this, they are not a reckless folk but rather are ruled by law. They bind themselves to Arthur’s code and their own law, called the Rider’s Oath. This code, you see, forms the blueprint for their whole society, the definition of what it means to be a Child of the Lake.

Being an organized people, Stormrider society is divided into five castes: the warriors, the scholars, the merchants, the makers, and the hearth-keepers. Each caste represents a wide range of ability. Warriors do not simply fight with sword and shield but face their realm’s enemies on whatever battlefield they must, meeting their opponents with the strength of magic or steel. Scholars approach life's difficulties with thought and study and share the secrets they discover throughout the realm. Makers build or shape their solutions, while merchants call upon who they know, what they own, or how they can bargain to resolve conflict. Lastly, the hearth-keepers face the world with wisdom and a parent’s intuition. Not by birth are these castes assigned but by each individual’s choice and whatever the caste a candidate chooses, male or female, the Stormriders respect and honor this choice. No greater sin is there among them than to force or coerce a person into choosing a caste. By this freedom of choice and strength of will are the Stormriders defined.

If you were to try to pick a Stormrider out in a crowd, it might prove a challenge for they appear human enough. However, the Stormriders have one physical trait that announces their coming: a small jewel in their forehead. This jewel is a mark of the caste and it draws its power and color from the Stormrider’s body. While the Stormriders are essentially human, their life cycle is not. They stay in a child’s form for nearly twenty years, all the while learning from the elders and masters of each caste. The elders encourage the young ones to pursue what their heart desires. Girls learn to take up arms just as boys learn to keep the hearth and home. To the Stormriders, the freedom of choice is far more important than the shape of the body. This freedom applies to every member of his or her own race and, in their opinion, to all the other races of Arthur’s realm.

When the child is ready, the young one kneels before the elders of the chosen caste and asks for admittance. Once granted, the child is then led to the Lake of Storms itself and commanded to drink deeply from its Veilstorm-infused waters. This taste of magic awakens the might of the soul, and the child’s body begins its transition into adulthood.

During these formative years, the adults of the caste challenge the young one’s choices, so to ensure that he or she is making the right decision. There is no shame in changing one’s mind at this stage, for the young heart is fickle and it takes great maturity to listen to its true calling. The elders also instruct the child in the complete Rider’s Oath. In part, it goes a bit like this: without faith, our purpose will not shine brightly / without conviction, our faith is but an illusion / without honor, conviction can be turned to evil. There is more, but only a Stormrider may recite it in full and it is very long for it is contained within and is also the history of their people. Only once a child fully embraces the Rider’s Oath are they allowed to request to face the trial that determines whether they can become a Stormrider. Kneeling once again before the caste’s leaders, the adolescent humbly asks embark upon his or her final and most dangerous test. Candidates that are deemed ready will spend this night preparing for their final trial. The Stormrider saying of “As is the mind, so becomes the body” is especially true this night. For before facing a Veilstorm the candidate must focus on a single goal, to desire nothing else but to be the living embodiment of their caste. There is no proscribed way for this vigil and sometimes it takes the form of quiet reflection, other times a candidate may recite the Rider’s Oath again and again and some candidates have been known to try to exhaust themselves physically through manual labor.

As I have said, the Stormriders embrace and defy the Veilstorms. It is not from the riding of a mere animal, no matter what size, that the Children of the Lake have earned their other name. The name is born from the tradition of the final test, the riding out of the totality of a Veilstorm. It is a terrible and solemn ritual. A pair of elders leads the nearly grown youth to a ceremonial place where a Veilstorm bolt once split a rock in twain. They strip the youth bare and bind one arm and both legs to either side of the cleft rock. In the free hand, the candidate holds a sacramental knife, forged of the purest steel, and inscribed with his or her true name. The elders leave the adolescent alone and naked to face the full might of a Veilstorm. Some scream, some shout, some sing, some weep, and the rare, strange few stay silent, but no matter how the candidate cries and struggles, the elders do not intervene.

The storm changes the youth before their very eyes: pulses of light drift beneath the skin, ribbons of energy course through loosened hair, and beams of light shine from the pupils. Subtle lines crisscross their body from the paths of raindrops; each track signifies a lost impurity. When the storm passes, the elders rush to the candidate, unbind, and wrap him or her in warm towels and blankets. Then, they rigorously scrutinize the candidate for any anomalies. A candidate affirmed in his or her chosen caste discovers that the storm has bestowed gifts upon him or her: great strength or energy, a swifter mind or sharper senses, heightened talent or impressive fecundity, and so on, as befits his or her new role. When the elders confirm that the candidate is whole and well, they announce the arrival of the new adult as a Stormrider. Then, a joyous celebration is held with songs of past triumph, dancing and revelry, and such food and drink as you can only imagine, friends.

Know this, though: not all candidates who stand before the storm pass their trial. If the candidate uses the knife to cut the binding straps, it is considered a sign of weakness. If the youth is unchanged by the Veilstorm, the nascent Stormrider must leave and never return. If malevolent change has taken place, the candidate’s fate is most terribly sealed. There are also some who enter into the first Riding with a weak will or darkness in their hearts. For this, the storm punishes them, twisting their bodies and minds to match the void within them. Some of these abominations realize what they have become and beg for a swift and merciful death. These imperfect candidates are given the choice to either take their own life by using the ritual knife, or to die with dignity at the hands of the elders. Regardless of their choice, they are then given a proper burial and the honor of keeping their birth name. However, friends, there are those who fail completely and become true monsters. For them, there is no salvation. They are put down like the raving beasts they are, and their name and history is stricken from the memory of the people, never to be spoken of again. Harsh, I know, but such are the traditions of the Stormriders. There are also a select few for whom the storm chooses a different caste than the one pledged in their youth. These transformed young adults face a choice between death, exile, and Riding the storm again. Nearly all choose the latter. Those who fail the second test almost always become true monsters, but those who pass are forged into something new, something chosen by fate. They are called Stormchosen, and it is said that they are destined to do great things.


You must be wondering, friends, who I am to know these secrets. Let it be known that I am one of those from whom the Storm had other plans. Alas, friends, I did not have the courage to face the terror of a second storm, so I chose exile instead. Thus, here I am, cursed to wander this world and share the story of my filing. As to my name, I was once called Medraut.

Thus ends the tale of the Children of the Lake.

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I’ve also included some shots that show off our UI/Web interface in action with both an IRC channel on the main display as well as a familiar web page.  I've also added some additional environmental concept art to add a little color to this piece.

That’s it for today!

-Mark

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Comments

    1. Creator Josh - Alomar on August 7, 2013

      Great read, look forward to more!

    2. Creator Peter McKenzie (Mirelind Alb Merlin) on August 7, 2013

      The interesting part will be is Medraut a hero or a villain. Because it is believe that Medraut or Mordred was actually a hero at the battle of Camlan.

    3. Creator Peter McKenzie (Mirelind Alb Merlin) on August 7, 2013

      Medraut or Mordred? for those with a keen eye, you will know that it has been rumored that Arthur had a son with that name :) I can't wait to hear more about the lore and how it affect CU from this race :) Sounds very interesting and it was a intense read and like 4 am in the morning. I did that falling asleep thing at the end of each paragraph, as many time as i read it i still had to come back the next day to get the full understanding. Ty MJ and writers! Look forward to the next installments.

    4. Creator Johnathan Tan on August 6, 2013

      Lovely story, keep them coming.

      Also, another typo spotted, I believe it was supposed to be 'share the story of my [failing]' in the last few lines.

    5. Creator Bernd Pichal on August 6, 2013

      Lore sounds abit like the mist of avalon. I wonder how they look like.

    6. Creator MintBerryCrunch on August 6, 2013

      cool story bro! was a fun read

    7. Creator John Maddox on August 6, 2013

      Much coolness!! And yes, that very much looked like a DAoC toon in his stance ;)

    8. Creator Drew on August 5, 2013

      I absolutely love the road map reports. Makes me feel confident about seeing some awesome results from the few hundred I dropped.

    9. Creator Telyn on August 5, 2013

      Another great story! I'm loving the lore of this game. I can't wait to see the character art for the Stormriders.

    10. Creator Nanulak on August 5, 2013

      Cool, was wondering about this part of the lore: "..the storm has bestowed gifts upon him or her: great strength or energy, a swifter mind or sharper senses, heightened talent or impressive fecundity, and so on, .."

      Is this a form of stat boot based on the chosen caste?

    11. Creator Robin (binskki) on August 5, 2013

      Very, very, very cool. With extra verys on top. :)

    12. Creator Jouni Karhu on August 5, 2013

      Good job with the editing -- spotted only one typo ;)
      "Let it be known that I am one of those from whom the Storm had other plans." from->for

      When it comes to the contents, nice! A Stormrider warrior might be a nice class to play...

    13. Creator City State Entertainment on August 5, 2013

      [MJ] Glad you folks like the Stormriders. I think that they are a nice addition and, for obvious reasons, I really like the backstory. :)

    14. Creator Outis on August 5, 2013

      Love the story can't wait for more Lore of this game.

    15. Creator Tierless on August 5, 2013

      The way that was written reminded me of a game into (cocks eyebrow in a questioning way)

      It was like Spartans combined with The Lost Tribe of the Sith, who wouldn't like that? Instantly I wanted to RP as someone that walked away (becoming an outcast) rather than went back for another Storm....or be a hunter of those outcasts ;)

    16. Creator Fruz on August 5, 2013

      great story =), immersion is there, like reading a good book ^^ ! I like the concept of the stormriders too.

    17. Creator Sethman on August 5, 2013

      Story was great! Between the oath they live/die by and the ritual of going enduring an actual veilstorm, this is one race I wouldn't want to mess with.
      The uncertainty of whether you picked the right caste, and even if you are dedicated to it, the veilstorm can have other ideas for you ;) Hell, you just might die or go insane trying. Its great!

    18. Creator James Budge on August 5, 2013

      That first screenshot looks incredibly like the default attack stance animation from DAoC :-P

    19. Creator Amber - (Edany - aka Troll Slayer) on August 5, 2013

      Great job on the story, I wasn't expecting to like it as much as I did! :)

      Definitely looking forward to more.

      *dances away singing..."I feel good!!! I knew that I would now...."*