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Fully cooperative tile-based exploration and resource management survival game set in a post-apocalyptic world for 1-6 players.
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Final Proofreading #1

Posted by Dave Schroeder (Creator)
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We are doing the final preparations to send everything to the printer!  Over the last few weeks we have given everything another once-over to make sure we didn't miss anything, made a couple of tweaks here and there, and then organized all of the finished files (along with a final parts list and file manifest) for the printer.  We have also been finalizing the manual layout, which should be ready this week for final proofreading and blind testing.

What we need now is more eyes.  If you have some time, please look over some or all of this and let us know if there is anything that looks wrong or unclear.  We are splitting it up into 2 batches, but be warned that there are a ton of images when you scroll down.

Tiles

 Quick Reference

 Character Cards

 Manual

Here are a few of the pages that we are totally done with:

 -Rob and Dave

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    1. Anthony Rubbo
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      I sent a bunch last week via KS messaging - I hope they got through.

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      Michael Rafferty on

      Skeptic appears to be missing a "not"
      Enemies will *not* spawn until ...

    3. Robert Cutter RobandDavegames.com on

      @Thompgc @ Marc P - Thank you!

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      thompgc
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      Tracker - anytime should be any time

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      Marc P on

      Component Info - Survivor Cards. Missing a period at the end of the last sentence.

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      Marc P on

      Component Info - when describing Base Tile

      a space is needed between 4 sided and die. Currently it reads sideddie.

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      Marc P on

      Soldier is misspelled in the description for the Soldier card.

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      Marc P on

      The word seperate is misspelled on the Investigator card. Correct spelling is separate.

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      Marc P on

      Space needed in word "on top" in the Collapse description. Also on the Quick Reference Card

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      Marc P on

      Spelling mistake on the word "impassible" - last word on Blaze description. Also on the Quick Reference card.

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      Marc P on

      On the same Quick Reference Card - a space is needed on the heading for Survivor Actions

      Last sentence - "players are not required to spend all of their AP." Space is needed between not and required.

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      Marc P on

      Dave, on the Quick Reference Card - the heading for Move / Close Combat appears to be missing a word.

      It reads "Close combat goes on until either the enemy dead or the survivor is incapacitated."

      Should it read "Close combat goes on until either the enemy is dead or the survivor is incapacitated."? I think that will keep the tenses consistent for you.