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Update #8: Story #4 - It's that time!

Posted on February 24, 2010

Hey all - Story #3 is out there and it seems to be making the rounds. It's already gotten 10 times the number of views than the first one. Great work, Collective!

So what are we going to do with Story #4? I don't have a big high concept idea for this one like the last two - but the manner of its composition will be a challenge in itself. This Thursday evening I'll be getting on the red-eye to go to Massachusetts for the weekend. Our fourth story will be a tale-in-transit.

As always, send me your submissions. Make them villainous.

But this time, also send me your ideas about what to do both inside and even outside of the story to make this one a different experience.


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      Joy Begbie on February 26, 2010

      CHARACTER: Eli Jørgensen is the left half of a pair of conjoined twins. He designs roller coasters but has never actually ridden one due to his physical condition. He can't even go to the theme parks where his better roller coasters are displayed, because people tend to assume he is there for a freak show and protest out of political correctness.

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      Julie Hauldren on February 26, 2010

      Since I excel at procrastinating and breaking rules, I'd like to submit 3 adjectives for this story, to make up for the ones I failed to submit the last 2 stories. Do what you will. Here goes. TUMULTUOUS. ASTRONOMICAL. ERINACEOUS. Can you use all in one sentence? Come on. I'm pretty sure you can. Ain't nothing to it but to do it!

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      Helen Michaud on February 26, 2010

      @Dan: A costume eight months in the making? That's going to be epic. You'll have to find some way to share pix with the Collective ...

      @Jayson: I'm flattered, especially since when I read yours I could think of nothing cooler. this.thrustEmergencyKill(thrusterPID); for the second time, indeed!



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I'm a media-creator and journalist. I've been trying to write novels since I was five years old (Hardy Boys: Case of the Pirate Treasure) but I just finished my very first one (The Collective). When I'm not excitedly hammering out first drafts or slogging through re-writes, I do online news for San Francisco-based Current TV.

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