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Week 3: Script Book Bonus

Update #3 · Aug 6, 2012 · 2 comments

Given that we're only about $500 away from being fully funded (you guys rock), I've decided to add a little extra incentive. If we can hit our goal by Friday (8/10/12) , I'll be giving away a free digital download of the Pawn Shop Script Book to every backer at the $10 reward level or higher. 

What is the Script Book, you ask? Pretty much what it sounds like -- I'll be compiling all of my hand-written notes and rough drafts of Pawn Shop (I write everything long hand first), along with the official typed scripts, which will hopefully provide some insight on not only my development and writing process, but also how these scripts have been translated by Sean in the final product. We'll also include some rough sketches and layouts from Sean to give the full scope of our creative process. 

I've included some samples of what you'll find in the book below. Here's an early breakdown of Chapter 1:

 An early example of the opening scene, some stuff that made it and much more that didn't:

This then led to a more solidified version of the opening sequence:

And then, there's the final typed-up script pages (please excuse the funky spacing below, it won't be like that in final version, obviously), which I flesh out and tweak as I type from my initial notes. The first version of the typed script is my official first draft, which I then go back through and revise time and again. This is what Sean actually works from:

And so forth! Hopefully this will give those interested some insight into our project, as well as give me time to reflect back on the many stages and iterations of this book. So keep getting the word out there and let's make this happen! 

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      Creator Adam Walters on August 7, 2012

      Cool. This will interesting to look through after reading the thing.

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      Creator Jon Westhoff on August 6, 2012

      Awesome!

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    All of the $50 rewards plus co-write a bonus short story for the book with Joey that Sean will illustrate. You will also receive one extra print copy, an original page of art of the artist's choice, and your name listed in the extra special "Thank You" page in the front of book. (+$15 for international)

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    All of the regular $50 rewards, plus the backer can dedicate OUR book to whoever they like with a special message. Must be tasteful, of course. Marriage proposals are welcome. You will also receive an extra signed copy to give to the dedicatee along with an original page of art of the artist's choice. ($+15 for international)

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