We had our screenplay read by one of the greatest screenwriters today. He had some great tips to make it better, but his main feedback was that it totally engaged him, that it is "great stuff". This from someone who reads scripts every day and doesn't get past page 10 or 15.
He had some tips about our teaser on kickstarter, too. SO I made those changes and uploaded it today. Let me know what you think, and please, send the link http://kck.st/ThatsNotHowItsDone to everyone you know! Every little bit helps, even $10 or $25 moves us closer to our goal.