Evolution of a Page
Now that we've hit our target, I have been able to get the actual production of our book back on track.
Going into out last week on Kickstarter, I wanted to give you all a little peek into the production process.
We go by a fairly traditional script, pencils, inks, colors breakdown of labor.
For example, here's the script portion for page 2 of the 1st issue:
Page 2.
Panel 2-1. Extreme Close-up of a young BLYTHE’s face. He is laying on his side, eyes clenched shut out of terror. There are beads of sweat streaking across his forehead. Abject terror is the name of the game.
CAP1
WHEN HE HEARD THE SNAP OF NEARBY ROUNDS HE KNEW HOW REAL IT ALL WAS.
Panel 2-2. The shot pulls out. We see the young FREDERICK BLYTHE lying on his side on a barren Afghan mountainside, using a rock no bigger than a 20 lb medicine ball for cover. Bullets are flying everywhere. His hands are feebly on his ACH (helmet) as he tries to shut it all out. He is in full kit (plate carrier, IFAC, magazine pouches, etc) and is carrying both an M-4 and a Canon 5D Mark II camera. He is also wearing Peltors (I have photo ref in my files).
CAP2
IT WASN’T FEAR THAT CRIPPLED BLYTHE. IT WAS THE TERRIBLE LACK OF KNOWING.
CAP3
WHEN YOUR LIFE IS ON THE LINE, EVERY ACTION MUST BE DECISIVE.
CAP4
BUT HE COULDN’T DECIDE…
Panel 2-3. CAPTAIN JOHN SHAPIRO screaming at him pulls BLYTHE back. He is looking back at SHAPIRO who is crouched behind a larger rock, bullets ricocheting around him.
SHAPIRO
HEY, COMCAM. HOW ABOUT YOU TAKE SOME FUCKING PICTURES!
CAP5
CAPTAIN SHAPIRO’S WORDS CUT LIKE OCCAM’S RAZOR. THE SIMPLEST ANSWER WAS THE KEY.
Panel 2-4. Heartened by CPT SHAPIRO’s words (actually, more offended and challenged), BLYTHE grabs his camera with a determined look on his face.
CAP6
THERE WAS A JOB TO BE DONE
CAP7
A CLIENT TO PLEASE.
From there, Josh Hood takes the words and turns them into pencil art:

From there, our inker - Mikey Babinski - puts down the final linework, readying the project for color:

Finally, colorist Mike Spicer takes it to the final level:

I hope you've enjoyed this behind-the-scenes look at our production process!
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SHOOTER - Your job has many factes, but one stands above the rest: You SHOOT. At this level, the fine folks at Crye Precision (the premier designer and manufacturer of combat apparel, armor and tactical equipment for the Special Operations community) have teamed up with TILT-SHIFT: The Quiet Profession to get the word out there about the fight downrange! 50 lucky donors at the "$50 and up" range will receive a multi-cam Shooter's Cap signed by the creative team, along with a signed copy of issue #1 and PDFs of the first 6 issues.
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GENERAL - I, Jose L. Torres, will come to your store, trade show, school, community center, etc with noted Combat Cameramen Calvin Reed and Joseph Wilson to give a lecture on Special Operations Combat Photography, including exclusive video and photo content. We will share personal war stories, answer questions and sign books. At the $2000 level, we will travel as far as 10 hours drive from the DC metro area. Beyond that, we will require transportation and lodging be provided.
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Comments
Creator Devin Michaels on September 23, 2012
I always love seeing the process of page coming together. The awesome way words become panels and panels become a story. Amazing!
Thanks for sharing!
Creator Jose Torres-Cooban on September 23, 2012
Glad you liked it!
Creator Jasper Leenarts on September 23, 2012
Great insight Jose, tnx